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Tks, Ceoil (talk) , 4 March 2012 (UTC) Brianboulton comments: Here are a few points that I hope you will find helpful.From what you say, you recognise that the article needs a considerable amount of work; hopefully my suggestions will be helpful in that respect.Thanks, Distributor108 (talk) , 31 March 2012 (UTC) This peer review discussion has been closed.This article is still at an early stage of development, but I would like guidance as to where to take it from here in terms of focus/coverage, structure etc.I think of the bolded name as a forward reference to this. This is a change I made recently to make the formatting better. Why they wanted the measurement is not clear, but it seems to me that the desire or need for a measurement is not really the point of the prank.
If you read one of the Acts in the original (which you can do from the Google books link I provided), it should become much clearer to you, and this is the reason for citing directly to the original as well as to the material you did cite, so the reader can also read it if desired. I'd particularly like feedback about prose and flow, and comments about NPOV would be welcomed, as well.
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Please review the article and make any suggestions for improvement if need be.I found & changed a few things, especially links, & no doubt others will too. I fixed the "Daily Worker" name; and the footnote columns are set to colwidth=20em, which is pretty standard.